the greaT STORY OF FLIEY AND FLANNEL

i'm still writing the books but this is the firschapter 1......the twins are born
one day just 2 normal white chao popped out of there eggs both hatched at the same time. They looked around they didn't know where they were. they looked up at the bight sun feeling like this was there home. Then suddenly they saw something coming up to them. they didn't know who it was until it said"hello i'm cheese 2 who are you" fliey and flannel looked at each other. they were still inside there egg shell. cheese 2 saw some markings on the egg shell it said on one fliey and on the other flannel." your called fliey and your called flannel" cheese 2 said"why don't you come to my house".
"ok" the twins said.
in cheese 2's house there were lots of fruit. it had 3 bedrooms. 1 with a double bed where cheese 2 and icey (cheese 2's wife) slept and 2 spare rooms where the twins would sleep. 1 of them is where there daughter invise would sleep. the other had double bed just for them.
"tomorow i will help you get your own house"cheese 2 said.
t chapter of the first book

I like that.I can't wait for the next chapter!

i have done the next chapter but i'm gonna post that with the first 3 storys

Kay it was great though.

i wont be able to post all of it

Is it really long?

very long

I saw it on the Chao Cadets site.It is soooo long!

i love writing storys